Hey,
Let's talk about your landing page.
Maybe it's for your Ecom store, your SaaS trial, your info product, your agency services, or an affiliate offer you're promoting.
You look at it... and it seems pretty good, right? Clean design. Decent copy. Maybe you even paid someone decent money to build it.
But the conversion rate?
It sucks. Or at least, it's nowhere near what it should be.
Traffic hits the page, you see the visits in Analytics, but people just aren't taking that next step – buying, signing up, booking a call.
Sound familiar?
Here’s the frustrating part:
Often, the biggest things killing your conversions aren't some super-complex technical glitch or needing a $10,000 redesign.
They're fundamental flaws hiding in plain sight. Things you've probably looked at a hundred times and just... stopped seeing.
Why does this happen? Two main reasons I see constantly:
Familiarity Blindness: You're too close to it. You built the page, you wrote the copy, you know what your product or service does. So your brain fills in the gaps. You overlook confusing language or missing information because you already know the answer. Your visitor doesn't.
Shiny Object Syndrome: It's easy to get distracted by tweaking button colors, fiddling with fancy animations, or running complex A/B tests before nailing the absolute basics.
These "simple" mistakes aren't really simple when they're bleeding conversions every single day. Lost sales for Ecom. Fewer trials for SaaS. Higher lead costs for Info Products. Fewer booked calls for Services. Lower commissions for Affiliates.
It all adds up.
Alright, let's put on our detective hats.
I'm going to tear down 5 of the most common conversion killers I find all the time when I'm auditing funnels or looking at sites to potentially acquire or fix. These pop up everywhere:
The Problem: Your main headline – the first big text people see – is unclear, generic, tries to be clever instead of clear, or completely fails to convey the core value proposition immediately.
Why it Kills: You have maybe 3-5 seconds to convince someone they're in the right place. If your headline doesn't instantly answer "What is this?" and "What's in it for me?", they're gone. Bounce.
Evidence I See:
Ecom: "Welcome to Dave's Shoe Store!" (Instead of: "Durable Hiking Boots Built for Any Trail")
SaaS: "Revolutionizing Synergy Paradigms" (Instead of: "Project Management Software That Saves You 5 Hours/Week")
Info Product: "Unlock Your Potential" (Instead of: "Learn Guitar Basics in 7 Days - Free Video Course")
Service: "Smith Consulting Group" (Instead of: "Accounting Services That Reduce Your Tax Burden")
The Fix: Write a headline that is crystal clear and benefit-driven. Use the visitor's language. What specific problem do you solve or outcome do you deliver? State it directly. Clarity beats cleverness every single time.
The Problem: The absolute most critical elements – your core value proposition (often tied to the headline), your main call-to-action, maybe a key visual or trust signal – are NOT visible immediately when the page loads. People have to scroll to find the important stuff.
Why it Kills: Attention spans are short. People make snap judgments based on what they see instantly. If the reason they clicked isn't immediately validated or the next step isn't obvious, they assume the page isn't relevant and leave. This is 10x worse on mobile.
Evidence I See: The "Add to Cart" button below the fold on a product page. The "Start Free Trial" button hidden after paragraphs of text. Key pricing info nowhere in sight. Zero social proof (like testimonials or logos) visible initially.
The Fix: Treat your above-the-fold space like prime real estate. Get your killer headline, a short supporting sentence reinforcing the value, your primary call-to-action button, and maybe one crucial image or trust element visible without scrolling. Be ruthless about what makes the cut.
The Problem: Your Call-to-Action (CTA) button – the thing you actually want people to click – uses weak, passive language ("Submit," "Click Here," "Learn More"), is hard to see (blends in with the background), or worse, you have multiple competing buttons confusing the user about what to do next.
Why it Kills: The CTA is the gateway to the conversion! If it's weak, confusing, or invisible, people won't click it. Simple as that.
Evidence I See: Generic "Submit" on contact or opt-in forms. Multiple buttons like "Request Demo," "See Pricing," "Watch Video" all competing above the fold. CTA buttons that use the same color as other non-clickable elements.
The Fix: Use clear, specific, action-oriented language. Tell people exactly what will happen. Examples: "Get Your Free Checklist," "Start My 14-Day Free Trial," "Add to My Cart," "Book My Free Consultation Now."
Make your primary CTA button visually distinct. Use a contrasting color that stands out from the rest of the page.
Have ONE main goal for your landing page and make that CTA the hero. Secondary CTAs (like maybe a "learn more" link) should be much less prominent.
The Problem: Your page doesn't do enough to convince visitors you're legitimate and that they can trust you with their money, email address, or time.
Why it Kills: People are skeptical online. If your page feels anonymous, unproven, or slightly shady, they won't risk converting. This is especially true for things that cost money or require personal information.
Evidence I See: No customer testimonials or case studies visible. Missing secure checkout badges on Ecom carts or order forms. Vague or non-existent guarantees for info products or services. Using generic stock photos that scream "fake." No easy way to find contact info or learn about the company/person behind it.
The Fix: Build credibility actively. Sprinkle in relevant trust signals:
- Specific customer testimonials (video or text with photos/names are best).
- Logos of well-known clients or partners (if applicable).
- Security seals (like Norton, McAfee, or just generic "Secure Checkout" badges) near forms or payment areas.
- A clear, strong guarantee (money-back, satisfaction, etc.).
- Professional design and real photos (of products, team, or happy customers).
- Easy-to-find contact information or an "About Us" link.
The Problem: This is a big one we covered last time, but it bears repeating because I see it constantly. The message, offer, keywords, or even visuals on your landing page do not match the ad, email, or link the visitor clicked to get there.
Why it Kills: It creates instant confusion and whiplash. "Wait, this isn't what I clicked on." Trust evaporates, and they bounce immediately.
Evidence I See: Ad promises "50% Off First Month," landing page headline talks about features. Email link promotes a "Free PDF Guide," landing page asks them to book a demo. Affiliate pre-sell highlights ease-of-use, software landing page focuses on enterprise power features.
The Fix: Keep the scent strong! Ensure your landing page headline, sub-headline, hero image, and the primary offer directly reflect and reinforce the promise made in the ad or link that brought them there. Consistency is key. (If you missed last week's deep dive on this, check the archive!).
While those five are the biggest culprits I hunt for first, keep an eye out for these too:
Overly Complex Forms: Asking for name, email, phone, company size, blood type, and favorite color just to download a checklist? You're killing your opt-in rate. Fix: Ask only for the absolute minimum you need right now. Use multi-step forms if necessary.
Weak Post-Conversion: Someone buys or signs up... and gets dumped on a generic "Thanks!" page. Huge missed opportunity. Fix: Use your Thank You page strategically. Tell them the next step, offer a related product/upsell, invite them to a community, ask for a share. Keep the momentum going.
Look, improving landing page conversions often isn't about some secret hack or radical redesign.
It's about doing the fundamental things right.
It's about looking at your page with fresh eyes – a detective's eyes – and spotting these common, conversion-killing mistakes that are hiding right under your nose. Fixing even one or two of these core issues can have a surprisingly big impact on your results.
Enough reading. Time to do something.
Pick ONE key landing page in your funnel right now. Your homepage, a main product page, your lead magnet opt-in, your service inquiry page – whatever is most critical.
Review it specifically against those 5 Killers. Use this email like a checklist. Be brutally honest with yourself. Where are the weak spots?
Identify the #1 biggest killer on that specific page. What's the most glaring flaw based on this teardown?
Don't try to fix everything at once. Find the biggest leak and patch that first.
Hit reply – which of these 5 killers do you suspect is hurting your key landing page the most right now? Headline? Above-the-fold? CTA? Trust? Ad Scent?
I read these. Let me know what you uncover.
Talk soon,
Andrej Ilisin
Funnel Detective